Death by William Carlos Williams

I like the poem Death by William Carlos Williams because this is a poem of how he deals with the death of his father. The poem seems to be a very dark and upsetting poem. What strikes me to this poem is the tone of this poem. Williams is describing how the dog won’t have to sleep on his potatoes (toes) anymore to keep them from freezing. “he’s dead the old bastard – He’s a bastard because there’s nothing legitimate in him any more he’s dead” (Williams pg. 295) I find that an unusually passage because there is “nothing legitimate in him anymore”, gives me the impression that Williams think with his fathers death that there will be no love for him anymore. The nothing in him could possibly mean the love in their father and son relationship. I feel that Williams is mad about his father dieing. That he is upset because Williams feels abandon. The last line “He’s sick-dead” could mean that he died sick or that Williams is sick that his father is dead.

---Richard Liptak

The Pool by Hilda Doolittle

I chose The Pool by Hilda Doolittle. because it is such an unusually title for this poem. H.D. starts the poem by saying “Are you alive? I touch you. You quiver like a sea-fish” (H.D. pg 395) This is what came to me when I read it. I did not think of a pool or any sea terms but a different interpretation that maybe a little far off. I pictured a homeless person lying in a cold street in a desolate city. A woman goes over to see if this homeless person is still alive, so she goes over to grab this homeless person and sees that this person is shivering. “I cover you with my net.” (H.D. pg 395) Out of the goodness of her heart she gives this homeless person her jacket. Her “net” for warmth. “What are you----banded one” (H.D. pg 395) I feel that after she gave her jacket to warm this homeless person, she wanted to know more about this homeless person. Branded one also strikes me because banded means marked with bands of different or contrasting colors. I have this vision of this homeless person that is very white, dirty, has a rose color nose because of the cold, and greasy black hair. With all of these different unique colors that this person has she is seeing many contrasts in colors in this homeless person.

--- Richard Liptak